I have absolutely no criticism. Okay, one. The epilogue was uneccessary. Not that I'm against the heteronormative confirmation of my darling Ron/Hermione but I liked it ending at the defeat of Voldemort. That's a good end. Epilogues are writers' indulgences and writers should sensibly avoid them. On the other hand, Rowling did not become an anti-editing crusader as she got more successful (unlike some writers, yes, I'm looking at you D Brin) so I guess she can have this little indulgence.Anyway. Ron/Hermione: hearts so big they cannot be contained by this text box. Everyone else: ALL the rest of the hearts. ALL OF THEM. Well done, everyone.